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Telepathic

Posted: September 5th, 2019, 7:44 pm
by creativesoul
She could feel it walking through her head
They thought it was a forest

The sounds and weight of her limbs
Distorted in mind: colors getting brighter

Pain inside the warp
The threads ran the wrong way

Shuffling feet and the scent of flowers
Little girls running and laughing for hours


Ballerinas with screams of joy
Smiles accross the ocean

Re: Telepathic

Posted: September 5th, 2019, 9:28 pm
by Cenacle
wow, you are good!

Re: Telepathic

Posted: September 5th, 2019, 10:26 pm
by judih
agree with ray, jana
this is fabulous

Re: Telepathic

Posted: September 6th, 2019, 10:32 am
by creativesoul
Wow- I am deeply madly touched( you knew that!) such
Beautiful compliments
Thank u
Mahalo
Mtake oyasin

Re: Telepathic

Posted: September 7th, 2019, 8:01 am
by saw
mysterious
like the first page of an intriguing novel
we learn there is more to this introduction

well done....nice use of language to set the stage