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night ignited
Posted: October 25th, 2019, 6:22 am
by wylde
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i parked my camel
and smoked an old poem.
the night ignited
but it rained only
ash
and my butt ached
for a dry sigh
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Re: night ignited
Posted: October 25th, 2019, 11:30 am
by saw
...nice imagery especially first two lines ( which could be an entire poem )
Re: night ignited
Posted: October 25th, 2019, 11:52 am
by mtmynd
Bingo!
(note: i'm sharing your "Until the lion learns how to write, every story will glorify the hunter" - African Proverb)
Excellent!
Re: night ignited
Posted: October 25th, 2019, 5:55 pm
by wylde
saw wrote: ↑October 25th, 2019, 11:30 am
...nice imagery especially first two lines ( which could be an entire poem )
thankyou saw.
comment valued.
Re: night ignited
Posted: October 25th, 2019, 5:57 pm
by wylde
mtmynd wrote: ↑October 25th, 2019, 11:52 am
Bingo!
(note: i'm sharing your "Until the lion learns how to write, every story will glorify the hunter" - African Proverb)
Excellent!
thankyou.
and
It's ours to share.☆