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Post by wylde » October 29th, 2019, 7:25 am

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crucifying thighs nail my rusted mind
a.cross
bearing en dowry bounty promulgating my pomegranate granite eyes
cracked through an absolution baptismal font washed
down grit gyroscopic slashes inviting

peace

to enter through revolver doors
triggered by hares breadth rifled stares

in turn all
internally integrating lightness

[of flocculated]

be ing

.
.homesick. but homeless.

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Re: washed

Post by saw » October 29th, 2019, 8:21 am

nice wordplay...
sounds are important in poetry...
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: washed

Post by judih » October 29th, 2019, 10:49 am

sounds that lead me round the revolve resolve
of be-ing

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Re: washed

Post by wylde » October 31st, 2019, 4:09 am

saw wrote:
October 29th, 2019, 8:21 am
nice wordplay...
sounds are important in poetry...
salute.
mindpaintings.
.nailed & hammered.
.homesick. but homeless.

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Re: washed

Post by wylde » October 31st, 2019, 4:12 am

judih wrote:
October 29th, 2019, 10:49 am
sounds that lead me round the revolve resolve
of be-ing
see-ing
being


you re-fresh re-tread
my tardy
pinwheel tired
.homesick. but homeless.

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