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washed

Posted: October 29th, 2019, 7:25 am
by wylde
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crucifying thighs nail my rusted mind
a.cross
bearing en dowry bounty promulgating my pomegranate granite eyes
cracked through an absolution baptismal font washed
down grit gyroscopic slashes inviting

peace

to enter through revolver doors
triggered by hares breadth rifled stares

in turn all
internally integrating lightness

[of flocculated]

be ing

.

Re: washed

Posted: October 29th, 2019, 8:21 am
by saw
nice wordplay...
sounds are important in poetry...

Re: washed

Posted: October 29th, 2019, 10:49 am
by judih
sounds that lead me round the revolve resolve
of be-ing

Re: washed

Posted: October 31st, 2019, 4:09 am
by wylde
saw wrote:
October 29th, 2019, 8:21 am
nice wordplay...
sounds are important in poetry...
salute.
mindpaintings.
.nailed & hammered.

Re: washed

Posted: October 31st, 2019, 4:12 am
by wylde
judih wrote:
October 29th, 2019, 10:49 am
sounds that lead me round the revolve resolve
of be-ing
see-ing
being


you re-fresh re-tread
my tardy
pinwheel tired