Quiet Skull

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the mingo
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Quiet Skull

Post by the mingo » November 20th, 2019, 3:18 pm

out by the quiet skull
at night
can't see the river
at night
sometimes you can hear it though
then, imagining to row
at night
Last edited by the mingo on November 21st, 2019, 10:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Quiet Skull

Post by saw » November 21st, 2019, 9:21 am

moving water at night has mystery
in the ears, to the heart, to the head
and you know, it deserves respect
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: Quiet Skull

Post by the mingo » November 21st, 2019, 9:47 pm

<* 8) *>
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Re: Quiet Skull

Post by jackofnightmares » November 21st, 2019, 10:43 pm

"down to the river to pray"
"Skepticism is the chastity of the intellect" Santayana The Idea of Christ in the Gospels
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Re: Quiet Skull

Post by the mingo » November 21st, 2019, 10:54 pm

"C'mon on in boys, the water is fine"
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Re: Quiet Skull

Post by jackofnightmares » November 21st, 2019, 10:56 pm

thank you both 8)
"Skepticism is the chastity of the intellect" Santayana The Idea of Christ in the Gospels
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Re: Quiet Skull

Post by mnaz » November 21st, 2019, 11:34 pm

Wind is like that too. Sometimes a distant river.
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Re: Quiet Skull

Post by wylde » November 25th, 2019, 8:12 am

mnaz wrote: ↑
November 21st, 2019, 11:34 pm
 Wind is like that too. Sometimes a distant river.
true. though jet streams move at the speed of dark.
.homesick. but homeless.
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