Ive been here and here is fucking cool

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Ive been here and here is fucking cool

Post by sonofthesun » May 14th, 2020, 2:16 am

That sun putting colors in my eye
and my brain making shit out of em
This is fucking awesome
Might not always work out perfect
for my mind way of thinking
but this shit is fucking awesome
I have thoughts
and I do things
hope for it to continue
at least for i more earth spin upon its axis
There is no empty space

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Post by mnaz » May 14th, 2020, 3:16 am

another spin in speckled space. How cool is that?

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Post by sonofthesun » May 19th, 2020, 5:06 am

I'm a fan
of gnosis
in the way the leaves settle
there is no empty space
i have found
all is as is important
as nothing else
There is no empty space

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Post by mnaz » June 3rd, 2020, 2:57 am

Consciousness is funny.
The world of bluffs and peaks
surrounds you, but is that true space?

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Post by sonofthesun » June 3rd, 2020, 3:36 am

It is impossible for us to know true existence except in fits and spurts. Pierce the veil so to say. Our reality we experience day to day doesn't coincide with the inner workings of infinity. Shit would be impossible. I would just sit open mouthed in wonder on a "hill" otherwise. Shit is fucking magic. We can't handle the "truth" for more than small samplings, if even that. Go listen to a waterfall eating a mountain.
There is no empty space

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Post by mnaz » June 3rd, 2020, 5:05 am

We only get truth of eternity in small samplings, in fits and spurts. Listen to a waterfall eating a mountain, or the cliff beside a canyon. (Why was it placed there? What is the shape of rock?) To me the whole thing seemed magic from a pretty early, hopelessly naive age.

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Post by mtmynd » June 4th, 2020, 1:31 am

mnaz wrote:
June 3rd, 2020, 5:05 am
We only get truth of eternity in small samplings, in fits and spurts. Listen to a waterfall eating a mountain, or the cliff beside a canyon. (Why was it placed there? What is the shape of rock?) To me the whole thing seemed magic from a pretty early, hopelessly naive age.
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Post by sonofthesun » August 27th, 2020, 1:23 am

as a child
i embraced alone
my make believe powers
are tremendous
There is no empty space

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