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The sun will rise

Posted: September 4th, 2020, 6:46 am
by creativesoul
On the table ; are envelopes and stamps
Looney tunes with bugs bunny on them
Coffee creeping up slowly this morning
Still dark.. the heat hides in the shadows
Smells like dust and sprinkled grass
All that sleep
is still engaged to my muscles
The sun will rise

Walking in the heat
Dog brings the toy
The squeaker is long gone

The dream stood quietly in the corner

Unattended ; wild

Re: The sun will rise

Posted: September 4th, 2020, 8:52 am
by saw
pre-dawn wonder
the limbo before light
yes yes, the sun will rise
whether we can see it or not

thanx....descriptive imagery
and palpable metaphor

Re: The sun will rise

Posted: September 5th, 2020, 8:48 am
by mtmynd
nicely expressed, c'soul... good read for a pre-dawn morn.