a story poem spun from a stool long ago

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saw
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a story poem spun from a stool long ago

Post by saw » December 12th, 2020, 6:48 pm

I was a transplanted philistine greenhorn buck
lookin for all the answers in a new geography

the record store was my constructed sanctuary
and there was plenty of ear candy and eye candy to tempt a boy
from that same swiveling stool where the pretty hippie girl with the Key West tan and the silver necklace
would religiously peel the plastic covering from the vinyl nuggets of gold and i would slip into another universe
where headphones amplified and caressed my baked skull.... and closed eyes were portals to contentment

things back home were contentious and hardlines never played well with me.....
They were doing their best I guess trying to apply their farm wisdom on a field of vegetables to be canned and stored
in the root cellar of the mind, so their move to Baltimore scared the hell out of them, they didn't recognize nor agree
with what their downhome eyes showed them, and they were dealing with a rebel without a known cause
and I was not one to be broken like a stallion, more like a wild mustang that needed to run the streets

so I left home at seventeen, rented a house with some other misfits from the neighborhood who unsurprisingly were
having troubles of their own, and by nineteen I had gone as far south as i could go in the United States, I knew that
because there was a sign in the sand that read Southernmost Point in the U.S......the end of US 1.....the sign added
from Fort Kent, Maine to Key West, Florida.....I landed on this construction site, then sitting on that stool I mentioned
every Friday evening after work with money in my pocket....had an oversized basket on my bike for my tools and lunch

I had stumbled into a place I happily called home and wouldn't see mom or dad again for seven years, that's how long
it took to recalibrate, maybe it's true what they say about seven year itches, or maybe it was a seven mile fissure
a crack in the psyche. but in any case that stool on Duvall St. sure seemed righteous and sure filled a void
and seeds were sown in the sandy loam and with a lot of subtropical sunshine something grew healthy and tall
I think it was Mark Twain that said, when i left home at 18 and came back when i was 25, I couldn't believe how much

mom and dad had learned....
Ha ha....me and Mark.......and never the twain shall meet
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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mnaz
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Re: a story poem spun from a stool long ago

Post by mnaz » December 13th, 2020, 2:05 am

You had me at 'transplanted philistine greenhorn buck'...
Great story of recalibration. (It doesn't happen overnight.)

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Re: a story poem spun from a stool long ago

Post by mtmynd » December 13th, 2020, 3:16 am

good to read you're still alive and kickin' these poems around the track...

keep it up, amigo... I believe we're both at the junction of life and death...
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Re: a story poem spun from a stool long ago

Post by stilltrucking » December 13th, 2020, 9:53 pm

lookin for all the answers in a new geography
8)

saw
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Re: a story poem spun from a stool long ago

Post by saw » December 17th, 2020, 9:00 am

thanx colleagues....life is a serpentine rollercoaster journey ... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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