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the thin air is fact

Posted: April 7th, 2021, 11:51 am
by saw
disturbing dreams fall like California ash
the Mid Atlantic sky ablaze with truth
unmoored and tossed about like the spring games
of April when they tend to dominate the narrative

I forgot my gloves in my haste to heal
the morning forced my hands into my pockets
you keep popping up like little sparks of white light
in the eyes of a puma stalking my memories

then just as quickly disappear into an ancient sunset
in Key West when I bought that stained glass rose
from a little shop that went under, gone like a ghost
like a puzzle piece of evaporated time

the thin air is fact not fiction
and I am whole

Re: the thin air is fact

Posted: April 7th, 2021, 12:49 pm
by judih
prolific gifts from you this day, Steve.
lines i love in this piece:
"like little sparks of white light
in the eyes of a puma stalking my memories"

"like a puzzle piece of evaporated time"

all your works posted this day are welcome shakes on my perspective. (so, thanks)

Re: the thin air is fact

Posted: April 7th, 2021, 3:20 pm
by saw
thanx judih for your heartfelt words....