personified elements of rare earth

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personified elements of rare earth

Post by saw » August 11th, 2021, 3:57 pm

psychic love transcends
tangled bodies

as cooing lovers demonstrate
the mind-meld of romance novels

centuries old.


soulmates look you right in the eye,
one half of an eternal flame accepting flaws

personified elements of rare earth
should be embraced if they ever reveal themselves to you

all you can do is keep your eyes open
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Re: personified elements of rare earth

Post by judih » August 11th, 2021, 10:07 pm

even against will
listen to inner seer
raw earth companion

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Re: personified elements of rare earth

Post by saw » August 16th, 2021, 11:41 am

yes, judih ... 8)
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Post by creativesoul » August 24th, 2021, 11:10 pm

Mmm I dunno. I feel love by the decade
Marked by husbands and lovers
Like a timeline through my heart

Lust and love ; for a time was very serious
Then: they got a divorce
Learned about autonomy
How to stand in our own power
How to meditate
Feel the force


Let it go

This is after 40 years old

I think love is coming to see me soon

Or is it already here?

That’s after 50

Then: 60..
now there is a surprise
The love I feel now is inclusive
But I still am married to myself.
It was hard being married to “ someone else”,,
I sort of was somebody else myself

But now all of those expectations
Have been bought and sold
A few times
Left as a donation at the Salvation Army

Changing houses, boyfriend; cars, husbands..

Transformation after re- orientation
So sure I was absent the day
The spirits gave instructions

I am changing continents and language
Because my mind is on fire with passion
could I be one of them?
Love to see creativity in the hands
Throbbing possessed with an energy
Much like love
Swirls and wind
Various colors come to mind

I think that is why they say” love is blind”
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by mnaz » August 26th, 2021, 12:26 pm

man, I'm going thru this right now. Am I ignoring such a revelation right before me?...

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Post by creativesoul » August 26th, 2021, 5:50 pm

Perfect for the journey
Knowing others are also experiencing
Similar stuff- validation
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: personified elements of rare earth

Post by saw » August 27th, 2021, 10:30 am

lots of great comments......the power of poetry to start a discussion .... 8)
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