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saw
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face it

Post by saw » September 6th, 2021, 5:19 pm

as many times
as I have fallen
on it
you wouldn't think
I'd have
a face
at all................

technically
that's a poem
but
perhaps
it's really just
another
face plant...........
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: face it

Post by judih » September 6th, 2021, 10:02 pm

splat
and i rise again
slightly flatter

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Re: face it

Post by saw » September 7th, 2021, 6:26 pm

haha judih.... :D 8) :lol:
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Re: face it

Post by sasha » September 8th, 2021, 12:49 pm

pratfalls
life's way of saying
"just who do you think you are??"
.
"Falsehood flies, the Truth comes limping after it." - Jonathan Swift, ca. 1710

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Re: face it

Post by saw » September 9th, 2021, 7:35 am

yeah Roy 8) ....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: face it

Post by creativesoul » September 9th, 2021, 3:57 pm

Oh to have a titanium toe
Fallen ? Perhaps it would be best to call it “ loss of composures “
The last trip and roll was pretty hilarious-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: face it

Post by saw » September 11th, 2021, 12:04 pm

fallen can mean so many things.... 8)
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Re: face it

Post by creativesoul » September 12th, 2021, 6:35 am

Like an angel?
Fallen
.. so how do you want me to read it? Hear it ?
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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