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creativesoul
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Wrinkles

Post by creativesoul » November 2nd, 2021, 2:42 pm

Time came out of the washing machine
Ten year drought and people use machines ..

Someday : we might rethink this stuff
Ironing the blankets
The wrinkle takes me on a journey
To a street I used to walk often
Portland has a river and there is a place with trees
There by the river
In summer it’s wild
In winter it’s cold and wet

Getting used to bi polar vision
Walking into a coffee house
Glasses steam up
But people look better with steamy edges anyway

Ironing these perceptions
Smooth
Lost and empty
Those were dreams that beautiful held tight
Kind of changed into real life means something else

At the end of the day
Really ?
Over and over
People say that Bike-rides
in fields of yellow flowers I missed you once for a few hours
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Wrinkles

Post by creativesoul » November 2nd, 2021, 2:44 pm

Well I guess…
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by creativesoul » November 2nd, 2021, 2:45 pm

And the yellow flowers
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Wrinkles

Post by creativesoul » November 2nd, 2021, 6:28 pm

The time you spoke to me
In that way
That makes a girls panties
Slide down the back of her legs

25-31
The “ meaningful “ touch
The concern and over lapping waves
Hanalei and your salty skin
The wrinkle
Does not lie about catamarans
Wind and sand .. dolphins follow the wake
You : brown in the sun with your sea like
Surfer eyes : that smile
The thunder beams talk of you
Sometimes
Late at night
I feel you

The eagles nest protests the intrusive
With its vision
That laughter that came from so much serious
Your paul mcartney face

I felt the ripple of childbirth
Connected forever
I feel you now
The crows feet around my eyes
It was you and my sons that gave me those wrinkles
From squinting
All that light
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Wrinkles

Post by the mingo » November 3rd, 2021, 12:49 am

~ every fucking word ~
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Wrinkles

Post by mnaz » November 3rd, 2021, 4:48 pm

Love all of this.
people look better with steamy edges...
Oh yes.

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Re: Wrinkles

Post by judih » November 3rd, 2021, 11:02 pm

mnaz wrote:
November 3rd, 2021, 4:48 pm
Love all of this.
people look better with steamy edges...
Oh yes.
yes, definitely. Thanks, mnaz for pulling out this line. And thanks creativesoul for putting it down.

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Re: Wrinkles

Post by creativesoul » November 5th, 2021, 10:55 am

Thank you.. very much
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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