ceremonial limbs

[saw]

rays penetrate my chest
the crisp air shakes me,
has my shoulders and won't let go

the wind persuades my limbs
to dance wildly,
I'd say they are uninhibited

if not, clearly possessed
I am insignificant if we look broadly,
a random critic of their performance

which goes on despite me
despite what I think, how I feel,
I just happened to notice

[creativesoul]

Often it would seem that the many limbs of the universe converge to give a moment of clarity. Hopefully
Dancing is pretty amazing
Enjoy

[creativesoul]

I liked this piece

[saw]

thanx c-soul.....