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pathless

Post by judih » February 19th, 2022, 1:07 pm

before each step, discovery
after each step, gratitude
before I see, epiphany
having seen, humility

I wait, weightless
I sing, voiceless
I’m free to slip away.

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Re: pathless

Post by saw » February 19th, 2022, 2:37 pm

beautifully expressed with an economy of words....a skill I don't possess

maybe a new term emerges....." waitless"..... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: pathless

Post by judih » February 19th, 2022, 10:50 pm

saw wrote:
February 19th, 2022, 2:37 pm
beautifully expressed with an economy of words....a skill I don't possess

maybe a new term emerges....." waitless"..... 8)
yes, waitless indeed. One day, I hope!

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Re: pathless

Post by creativesoul » February 27th, 2022, 1:09 am

Sweet- I like it a whole bunch
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: pathless

Post by judih » March 1st, 2022, 12:23 pm

thank you, Jana.

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