The Players In The Park

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edsiejka
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The Players In The Park

Post by edsiejka » March 5th, 2022, 5:47 pm

The Players In The Park

by Edmund Siejka

An errant breeze slipped in
Somewhere from the West Village
Caressing a couple
As they walked out of the park holding hands
Shoulders touching
Running her fingers through her hair
She stopped to look up
In return he smiled
His arms bringing her closer
Their lips meeting.

Nearby, the park musicians called it a day
Tired, the old man carefully put his violin back into its case
Next time they might try something new
Perhaps something from Verdi’s Aida
Leaving the park, he passed Our Lady of Pompeii
Hurrying across Carmine Street
He adjusted his cap
Before making the sign of the cross.

Overhead, a rainbow orange sun slowly dipped beneath the City’s horizon
Transforming a warm day into a cool September evening
Weekend crowds
Started arriving
Loud and boisterous
They swarmed the streets
In threes and fours.

Walking home he worried
The crowds at the park were getting smaller
The young never had time for opera
But why did they make their lives so hard
Just to push ahead?
The old man had no answer
Holding the violin case closer, he knew one thing for certain
For him another long day was over.

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Re: The Players In The Park

Post by creativesoul » March 5th, 2022, 6:19 pm

Sweet ! I love this ..
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: The Players In The Park

Post by judih » March 5th, 2022, 11:11 pm

yes, me too! So many details, mood, description. Well done, Ed

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Re: The Players In The Park

Post by saw » March 7th, 2022, 9:19 am

like a painting
a wonderful story unfolds in your poem... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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