The afternoon z

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creativesoul
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The afternoon z

Post by creativesoul » May 1st, 2022, 3:32 pm

The sun has already moved towards fall
It’s setting a few feet to the right : in the west
It’s cold in the garden in the morning
I wear socks and ugh boots


So many things I wanted to sai dunno where those words went
When I was walking

Then it’s water and a nap

I want to see from my other side eyes
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: The afternoon z

Post by sasha » May 1st, 2022, 3:41 pm

up here in el norte it's just the opposite! Rising sun shines in through the bedroom & kitchen windows, songbirds are starting to stake out territory, and twice, now, I've ventured outside without a fleece....
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Re: The afternoon z

Post by saw » May 1st, 2022, 5:03 pm

Here there are wild swings this time of year with the weather

days with tee shirts, then back to long sleeves with sweatshirts and maybe jackets

I like the poem

sometime when I am walking I think of so many things I'd like to convey
but alas all is gone when I depart the woods

but still better I think to think those thoughts.....they remain with you.....whether spoken or not...... 8) 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: The afternoon z

Post by judih » May 1st, 2022, 9:56 pm

i cling to socks
friends when required
words come and go

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Re: The afternoon z

Post by creativesoul » May 7th, 2022, 10:41 am

Sweet ! Thank you
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: The afternoon z

Post by mnaz » May 11th, 2022, 4:41 am

Love watching how the sun drops this way or that as the rock spins and the cold and the hot and breakthrough thoughts in quiet times that sometimes you can't quite bring back, and socks that I still cling to. Love all of that.

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Re: The afternoon z

Post by creativesoul » May 11th, 2022, 8:23 pm

I’m so immersed with your words
It’s as if we. Are intertwined with love and paint
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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