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The afternoon z

Posted: May 1st, 2022, 3:32 pm
by creativesoul
The sun has already moved towards fall
It’s setting a few feet to the right : in the west
It’s cold in the garden in the morning
I wear socks and ugh boots


So many things I wanted to sai dunno where those words went
When I was walking

Then it’s water and a nap

I want to see from my other side eyes

Re: The afternoon z

Posted: May 1st, 2022, 3:41 pm
by sasha
up here in el norte it's just the opposite! Rising sun shines in through the bedroom & kitchen windows, songbirds are starting to stake out territory, and twice, now, I've ventured outside without a fleece....

Re: The afternoon z

Posted: May 1st, 2022, 5:03 pm
by saw
Here there are wild swings this time of year with the weather

days with tee shirts, then back to long sleeves with sweatshirts and maybe jackets

I like the poem

sometime when I am walking I think of so many things I'd like to convey
but alas all is gone when I depart the woods

but still better I think to think those thoughts.....they remain with you.....whether spoken or not...... 8) 8)

Re: The afternoon z

Posted: May 1st, 2022, 9:56 pm
by judih
i cling to socks
friends when required
words come and go

Re: The afternoon z

Posted: May 7th, 2022, 10:41 am
by creativesoul
Sweet ! Thank you

Re: The afternoon z

Posted: May 11th, 2022, 4:41 am
by mnaz
Love watching how the sun drops this way or that as the rock spins and the cold and the hot and breakthrough thoughts in quiet times that sometimes you can't quite bring back, and socks that I still cling to. Love all of that.

Re: The afternoon z

Posted: May 11th, 2022, 8:23 pm
by creativesoul
I’m so immersed with your words
It’s as if we. Are intertwined with love and paint