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I need

Post by creativesoul » May 2nd, 2022, 7:35 pm

I need someone smarter than me better - with a clear perspective

But not always real fun
Oh yeah it’s good
But sometimes
All this profound depth makes me want to puke sometimes
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: I need

Post by creativesoul » May 3rd, 2022, 7:10 pm

I signed up for this: I made a commitment : long ago.

Sometimes it is all about listening
Hearing and not taking it personally
Empty vessel hallow bone
Somehow love is transmitted
There is an ebb and flow

Although it seems incredibly slow sometimes
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: I need

Post by judih » May 3rd, 2022, 9:49 pm

the words are correct
putting thoughts into action, a little tricky
but maybe we're getting better at it? or at least more aware of how much work it's going to take to get better.

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Too slow it seems.

Post by mnaz » May 4th, 2022, 2:13 am

Too slow it seems at times.

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Re: I need

Post by saw » May 5th, 2022, 9:03 am

sifting through a life can be tedious at times
these days I spend more time being thankful
for what is good....for what is working at this moment
and I believe most of the time we are doing the best that we can
at that particular moment in time
Awareness often hides in the bushes and needs to coaxed out into the light
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: I need

Post by creativesoul » May 7th, 2022, 10:38 am

Yes ! Thank you!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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