Disappointed in the Race

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mnaz
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Disappointed in the Race

Post by mnaz » August 25th, 2022, 4:02 am

I'm down on the Race.
Though I have good memories
of being in it.
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Re: I'm Disappointed in the Human Race

Post by mnaz » August 25th, 2022, 5:48 am

Lest I be slammed, in fairness I usually tone it down and try not to "inspire"more Gun Men or other people who snap and make a name for themselves. Note the concern.
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Re: I'm Disappointed in the Human Race

Post by judih » August 25th, 2022, 6:12 am

disappointment is not a surefire gateway to neurosis

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Re: I'm Disappointed in the Human Race

Post by mnaz » August 25th, 2022, 12:32 pm

Well we're all we got, so shame on me. Though I ain't wrong. Gun Men everywhere. Turn off the News.

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Re: Disappointed in the Race

Post by creativesoul » August 25th, 2022, 6:08 pm

Me too. The scammers - after one year - American shit stinks- but I’m in a pessimist state
I eat cabbage
I go places where everyone is old
The beaches are filled with dogs and old people
I want to ask them if they know anything
But Kahil Gibran knows everything and nothing
Today I had to let go
Of what I think about people
As I’m one of those don’t lie to me people
And if you do
Be ware
Not good

I have had people be real with me which is why I am still here
Looking for live in all the wrong places I guess
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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