Pimp That Ride-Enlarge Those Breasts

[Toerag]

Queen for a day
Win Lotteries
What we teach our youth
Is a mockery

Video games
Hip hop crap
Disquised as music
(Try humming rap)

Material things
Cribs owned by trash
Glorious cars
From rapper's cash

Nip and Tuck
That's all you need
A little coke
a toke of weed.

A fancy car
Luxury mansion
Brand new breasts
To seek attraction

Instead of wheels
That gleam with spinners
Perhaps some college
Would produce more winners?

What are we teaching
To our teens?
There's better routes
To self esteem.

[Lightning Rod]

great rap tune, toe

you should send it to Bill Cosby

I'll bet he would record it.

[Zlatko Waterman]

Nice ear for rhyme, and wonderful cuts where those cut deserve it most.

Reminds me of my favorite cd album title:


( by Pat Metheny)


"As Falls Wichita, So Falls Wichita Falls"

Well-crafted Mr. Rag.

And thanks for your comments on my own work.


--Z


( irrelevant note on Friday-- two glasses of Cabernet in . . .)

Are you in Santa Cruz, by any chance, Sir Rag? I was just curious whether you were a fellow Californiac--// Santa Cruz, home of the newly wed and the nearly dead . . .


--Z

[Toerag]

Mr. Waterman....Nope..live in North Alabama, near Huntsville....but been everywhere...from Saigon to Macon....used to work and travel and party with the Allman Bros. Band, (this is why I ain't right mentally I rectum, (and I'm probably the only true conservative that posts here....LOL)...but, still have some of "them" country morals etc., but not one of those die hard ta' hell with anyone that doesn't believe as I do conservatives......