Lovely

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creativesoul
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Lovely

Post by creativesoul » August 30th, 2022, 11:34 pm

Sorry I said for just losing my mind
I tried to pick it up
But it shattered in my hands
Thank you I think
But it’s not clear why
The light touched that inner core

The pictures appear on my eyelids
Your childhood
Your sadness

I feel like I opened the curtains
Let some light in there


My friend mysteriously appears
In a ghost like mania
In a dreamtime
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Lovely

Post by mnaz » September 1st, 2022, 3:57 am

Let some light in.

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Re: Lovely

Post by judih » September 1st, 2022, 10:01 pm

no mind, fewer illusions, molecules of surprise

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Re: Lovely

Post by saw » September 3rd, 2022, 3:47 pm

I love it
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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