once upon a time

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saw
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once upon a time

Post by saw » September 21st, 2022, 5:56 am

once upon a time,
oh such a classic beginning
why try to improve on greatness
but I digress....once upon a time
words tumbled
like loose rocks under a hiker's boot
cascading down the poetic mountain.....
now they prefer to hide
in forgotten lairs in the dark
hibernating
so deeply, I don't really know if they
will ever wake up again
But I sit here in the garden
like a believer that encourages
small miracles, I am patient
and I am a Patient.......Alive..............
so for today, I try to summon
just a few choice nuggets
of being poetic.....Ha Ha Ha
my thoughts
will have to suffice
until the real words escape the caves
are unearthed by turbulence, and
I'm OK with that.....
a patient patient patiently waiting.......
waiting to see what's next
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

mtmynd
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Re: once upon a time

Post by mtmynd » September 24th, 2022, 8:52 am

have your words... have they escaped the caves... yet?
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saw
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Re: once upon a time

Post by saw » September 28th, 2022, 8:24 am

I have my moments Cecil... 8) :D :lol:
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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