little notes

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saw
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little notes

Post by saw » October 23rd, 2022, 4:22 pm

little notes
are there to remind me of stuff
to take care of

it can work at times
but only if you see the notes, or
only if you can find them....

sometimes it actually works
but sometimes I just ignore them anyway
sometimes I'm notes averse

I like writing notes to myself
I feel powerfully in charge
it's a smoke a mirrors kind of thing

notes are probably better than
no notes,
but only slightly it seems
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: little notes

Post by judih » October 23rd, 2022, 10:09 pm

daring me to read
goading me to obey
don't note me!

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Re: little notes

Post by mnaz » October 25th, 2022, 9:48 am

Been there... They seem better than nothing ...

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