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saw
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orbit

Post by saw » October 30th, 2022, 7:47 am

been wondering
if I have a style
or does everything just sound
like chainsaws up on the ridge,
rumbling noise in the distance
with an occasional crash of falling trees,
Timber !

not that it matters much
it's just that the mind likes to travel,
it's a free spirit
with lot of notions in tow
pictures of erratic thought
zooming through the solar system
planetary pieces, space junk.......

my style, cough cough
has no significance, it is a waste
of thought that could be better served
trying to save the planet
but c'mon really.....what could a messed up mind
like this do to make this all better
No....my thoughts should just stay where they are

in orbit .....................where they belong
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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stilltrucking
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Re: orbit

Post by stilltrucking » November 2nd, 2022, 4:33 pm

free spirit orbits me
liked your poem alott 8)

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Re: orbit

Post by creativesoul » November 6th, 2022, 10:52 am

Yeah ya got style

Thank you for your post
Nice
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: orbit

Post by mnaz » November 7th, 2022, 2:09 pm

I like my erratic thoughts, up there in space where I can reach out and grab them. At times. Space junk and all...

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Re: orbit

Post by creativesoul » November 7th, 2022, 4:39 pm

I think that it is both a gift and a nightmare- to have the desire to create-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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