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orbit

Posted: October 30th, 2022, 7:47 am
by saw
been wondering
if I have a style
or does everything just sound
like chainsaws up on the ridge,
rumbling noise in the distance
with an occasional crash of falling trees,
Timber !

not that it matters much
it's just that the mind likes to travel,
it's a free spirit
with lot of notions in tow
pictures of erratic thought
zooming through the solar system
planetary pieces, space junk.......

my style, cough cough
has no significance, it is a waste
of thought that could be better served
trying to save the planet
but c'mon really.....what could a messed up mind
like this do to make this all better
No....my thoughts should just stay where they are

in orbit .....................where they belong

Re: orbit

Posted: November 2nd, 2022, 4:33 pm
by stilltrucking
free spirit orbits me
liked your poem alott 8)

Re: orbit

Posted: November 6th, 2022, 10:52 am
by creativesoul
Yeah ya got style

Thank you for your post
Nice

Re: orbit

Posted: November 7th, 2022, 2:09 pm
by mnaz
I like my erratic thoughts, up there in space where I can reach out and grab them. At times. Space junk and all...

Re: orbit

Posted: November 7th, 2022, 4:39 pm
by creativesoul
I think that it is both a gift and a nightmare- to have the desire to create-