Hold on, I'm coming

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saw
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Hold on, I'm coming

Post by saw » March 13th, 2023, 1:04 pm

Lost but breathing
I can't remember stuff anymore
Yet I can plod through a day with the best
somewhat less gracefully, I'd say

keep it simple
don't forget to eat
and brush those teeth
keep walking down the corridor

sooner or later
you are bound to hit something
a wall, or maybe a great idea
but something will stop you

so c'mon muscle memory
remember this is a set of stairs
hold the rail......hold the line
Hold On

I'm coming
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Hold on, I'm coming

Post by mnaz » March 14th, 2023, 4:42 am

Like Sam and Dave... Yes, keep it simple as possible.

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Re: Hold on, I'm coming

Post by creativesoul » March 21st, 2023, 3:44 pm

Ya got this
Yeah my feet wanna dance at all the wrong times
But it’s ok
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Hold on, I'm coming

Post by Doreen Peri » March 22nd, 2023, 12:22 am

It’s amazing you can still write. I can’t. I think of you often. Much respect and love.

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Re: Hold on, I'm coming

Post by creativesoul » March 24th, 2023, 10:50 am

thats sweet! Yeah i think about all kinds of stuff - reston- artwork- you- my mom- love to you
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Hold on, I'm coming

Post by saw » March 25th, 2023, 10:12 am

enjoyed all the comments a lot... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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