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Fading to Gray

Posted: May 29th, 2023, 10:56 am
by saw
I saw this enormous bumblebee
dancing around the columbine
tasting his way to nirvana I guess,
through this life with aplomb
and aviator's grace

two perched crows seemed
to admire his skill, his talent
his flitting routine
then they took off towards the lake
their blackness faded to gray

Re: Fading to Gray

Posted: May 29th, 2023, 2:08 pm
by mnaz
There we go. A striking moment relived and reimagined.

Re: Fading to Gray

Posted: May 31st, 2023, 9:11 am
by mnaz
Reminds me of the "fade to gray" I sometimes marvel at-- that twilight-dusk time when the world is shrouded in an ashen sort of shade that can't really be described or painted.

Re: Fading to Gray

Posted: June 2nd, 2023, 4:35 pm
by saw
thanx for great insights.....