There is No Paradise

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mnaz
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There is No Paradise

Post by mnaz » August 12th, 2023, 4:31 pm

There is no paradise,
no matter the plot, and I
thought there was a plot.
I thought Maui might be
paradise, but it wasn't.

I remember Maui
from many years ago,
but now it's gone.

saw
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Re: There is No Paradise

Post by saw » August 13th, 2023, 8:18 am

tragic...I was in Maui exactly 20 years ago...and I did believe that was the closest I've been to a conception of paradise
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: There is No Paradise

Post by judih » August 14th, 2023, 2:35 am

mnaz wrote:
August 12th, 2023, 4:31 pm
There is no paradise,
no matter the plot, and I
thought there was a plot.
I thought Maui might be
paradise, but it wasn't.

I remember Maui
from many years ago,
but now it's gone.
You saw it! So did Saw (steve). I only dreamt of being there. Mother Earth will recover, but our illusions took a crucial hit.

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Re: There is No Paradise

Post by creativesoul » August 14th, 2023, 10:59 pm

It is not gone- there is going to be amazing community and lots of p rebuilding- many losses - yes- but really- aloha lives on
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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