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saw
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doodles

Post by saw » August 23rd, 2023, 8:32 am

I doodled in the margins
poetic utterances with little faces
eyes unsteady as the nimbus cloud's journey
their peculiar expressions, their little arms and legs
and I waited for rain

ideas that would drench me
soak me to the point of no return
where I could leave the margin call
and slip between the blue lines
and connect the universe to something worthy

this is the exercise routine of a wannabe poet
stalling with drawings of creatures , doodlemen
doodles upon doodles, the precursor to language
doodles from top to bottom
when the thunderstorm arrives with gifts
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: doodles

Post by creativesoul » August 26th, 2023, 11:33 pm

I love those spiritual ones
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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mnaz
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Re: doodles

Post by mnaz » August 30th, 2023, 1:21 am

Yes I've seen that. It all seems to start with doodles, in my case, scribbled notes in spiral notebooks years ago when I was on the road.

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