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creativesoul
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What is

Post by creativesoul » September 5th, 2023, 2:35 pm

He was a good man
He spent his time
Trying to solve problems
Dog in the shadow of a leash

She was in love
Hey so what right?

The ideas that wandered in her mind the pain in her body
Nothing changed
He was still the one she loved
The meetings
The effort to be something new
Maybe that was useful

Maybe one day he would notice her
Even love her

But she knew
That was an illusion
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: What is

Post by saw » September 6th, 2023, 11:04 am

I've often referred to this phenomenon as " Seduced by Potential ".....no right , no wrong......only hope
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: What is

Post by mnaz » September 7th, 2023, 3:00 am

Ha, I'm in that situation now, only hope.
Love, what the hell is that?

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Re: What is

Post by creativesoul » October 12th, 2023, 1:24 am

I think it often a mystery
The real deal is what I do today
Battery not included
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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