hell is what earth

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hell is what earth

Post by e_dog » June 21st, 2005, 11:47 pm

hell is what earth
looks like
after you've seen
heaven

i wait for you
here

not knowing

breathing
still
in the impossible
present
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Post by AQuestion » June 22nd, 2005, 2:17 am

nice
Everything is surreal and i'm still not sure which decision I'll make.

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good job

Post by faithmairee » July 5th, 2005, 6:50 pm

To say so much in so few words takes a master of his art!
There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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Post by e_dog » July 11th, 2005, 2:24 pm

thanx for reading.

that is quite a compliment!
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Post by hester_prynne » July 11th, 2005, 2:45 pm

I must concur, this sums up just about everything in a nice, compact way.

Enviously good!
Yow!
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Post by stilltrucking » July 11th, 2005, 6:41 pm

- "A dark
Illimitable ocean, without bound,
Without dimension, where length, breadth, and height,
And time, and place, are lost: where eldest Night
And Chaos, ancestors of Nature, hold
Eternal anarchy, amidst the noise
Of endless wars, and by confusion stand."
http://emotional-literacy-education.com ... dfre10.htm

a dark frozen sea with in me, I see hell with in me. I see the earth as heaven right now. this moment, sometimes I see it is hell, but hell is mostly on my TV, on the home front it is summer and the living is easyand life is beautiful, a good day to die, a good day to live, a good day to yank your chain.

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Post by stilltrucking » July 11th, 2005, 6:56 pm

singingalong
sometimes its heaven sometimes its hell
sometimes I don't even know
heaven is headed for a cold water well
hell is when baby ain't here
pulling chains not as sweet as pulling heart strings

nice work just pissed me off it was so good, .

My hell is within me, the ice cracks, hear me creaking and groaning. She has been gone to long. I gave up, stopped listening to her. I have seen heaven, too, I was happy to find out that pets are allowed.
Trying to remember that old trees just grow stronger old rivers just get wilder every day. So long since I missed anyone. I actually miss the missing. Every geezers prayer, one more broken heart.

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Post by Doreen Peri » July 11th, 2005, 7:14 pm

hell yeah!

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