More Senseless Karma Bashing

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More Senseless Karma Bashing

Post by mnaz » July 1st, 2005, 3:52 pm

It is the only peace,
the one inside your skin,
as forms dissolve, evolve,
annihilate each other
in everlasting grace.

My fight will be let go.
Truth is mere energy.
Justice is rhetoric.
Karma was a false god,
a contrived neuron loop,
not focused on victory,
not focused on defeat,
or their milk-pure galaxy
of interchangable parts.

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Post by iblieve » July 5th, 2005, 7:13 pm

karma bashing will come back to haunt you, lol. I really like your word slinging ability "C"
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Post by mnaz » July 5th, 2005, 11:32 pm

It was a revelation to think of life as simply different forms eternal divine energy, a la Joseph Campbell, until I pondered how such notions of morality and cycles of karma might fit into this consciousness.... uncertain, at best....

Thanks....

(I don't think I'm quite done with this one)

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