Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

Underneath my clothes,
I'm wearing a sexy
black velvet dress.
It's sleeveless,
of course,
because my arms,
have always,
been beautiful.

It fits me tight,
in all the right
places.
So comfortable,
invisible,
I don't even
wear a bra
with it.

When you
see me in it,
you'll just
kiss me
all over.
You won't be able
to stop
yourself.

Happens
every
time
I put it on.

Damn what a beautiful picture you paint with words, makes me wish I could see that fucking dress, lol. "C"

hester prynne wrote:because my arms,
have always,
been beautiful.

Great poem! I really like the section quoted above. I might suggest dropping the comma after "have always,/been beautiful" because it seemed to interupt the flow. Nit-picky, but only a suggestion I have.