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Artguy
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Refusal

Post by Artguy » July 7th, 2005, 9:12 pm

REFUSAL

Here I lie arms crossed in belligerent refusal on the couch potato chesterfield pft pft pft sound of the spout watering the garden out the screened window exhausted from the heat of the brick and mortar hammers, saws and dust, wires and pipes building the house day small cottage across the street strange pink where did allen hide his marijuana 2 flies walking on the sun flower without sutra, scepter, gray locomotive and greasy river, is it true London explosions sieg hiel the blitzkrieg is back not allah burroughs is not dead but conducting terrorism eating naked lunch on roof of casbah in Tangiers, still I lie arms crossed in belligerent refusal……………

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Post by iblieve » July 14th, 2005, 7:53 pm

Amazing voice you have in this piece of writing which reads like a poem to me with any breaks. iblieve
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