Suffication

Post by **Doreen Peri** » July 8th, 2005, 1:34 am

..................

(short poem
one line......
dotted to
allow
breaths)

Post by **joel** » July 8th, 2005, 4:25 am

doreen peri wrote:..................

(after a long and blessed gift of quiet time)

When you repent and still afar your word
and cease not to silence, but rather seize
a time to smell the in-and-out of breath,
then take me for the audience to hear

its sounds nest gently in my ears; absurd
and clear, the volumes writ when you but wheeze
trumpet realities of simple breath.
When you repent from even healthy fear—

turn not your senses out for me, conferred
in frabjous chortles requiring speech. Please
turn and still; revolutionary breath—
equal beings’ living breath—let me hear.

Post by **Doreen Peri** » July 8th, 2005, 4:00 pm

"frabjous chortles"?

hehe

ok...

nice response, joel!

Post by **joel** » July 8th, 2005, 4:21 pm

i'm glad you liked the frabjous chortles.

Callooh! Callay!

Post by **mousey1** » July 9th, 2005, 1:02 am

????????????

I have no words

As I chortle frabjously

My mind

sinking

slowly

into

gelatinous

goo

????????????

...................

Doreen I've seen this somewhere before.

I think you've been plagiarized!!!!!

Post by **Doreen Peri** » July 9th, 2005, 1:35 am

well if you saw it somewhere before wherever you saw it must have been a place where they could read my mind in advance because i just wrote it last night.

dot dot dot
breaths
inbetween
waitedonmoments
for links to those
who have stolen
my thoughts before
i had a chance
to think them

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