Howling Dog Bites

Post by **iblieve** » July 14th, 2005, 8:12 pm

I’m a sweet heart
I’m a mother fucker
I'm the dog
howling at your pussy bare
if you dare
to bare it
trained, tamed and defamed
made to bite
with sharpened fangs
and the dog fight
is never over.

Let me be your sweet heart
eaten once too fucking often.
Let me be the mad dog
howling at your pussy bare
cause this mad dog will dare
the devil his delight
in blood filled halls burning bright
in magnificent evil light
dawns last gleam shining
off fangs white in the black
and I aint a shit-eater.
I’m a sweet heart!
I’m a mother fucker!!
I am the dog
howling at your pussy bare
and I bite!!!

iblieve

Post by **joel** » July 15th, 2005, 4:52 am

I really enjoy the linking of sweet heart with the carnal (sometimes violent) sexual images. Interesting play on whether "sweet heart" is being brought down to a carnal level or if carnality is being raised to a Valentine's Day card.

I like it.

Post by **iblieve** » July 22nd, 2005, 4:09 pm

Thanks Joel the comment is appreciated. iblieve

Post by **jimboloco** » July 23rd, 2005, 1:31 pm

with your long hair and beard
you not afeared of nada

Post by **YABYUM** » July 23rd, 2005, 2:58 pm

this is my kind of poem. I like its sound. good group of words.
one of my favorite notebook games is writing random words as they enter my head, then i try and form a poem or a paragraph or any kind of coherent structure.
"cause this mad dog will dare
the devil his delight
in blood filled halls burning bright
in magnificent evil light
dawns last gleam shining
off fangs white in the black"
thats a good stanza.

Post by **iblieve** » July 23rd, 2005, 8:00 pm

Thanks jimboloco, i have had to stand my ground moren' once.

Alexanderdeath, have you ever thought that your attitude is why no one comments on your post. I guess I gave you more credit thn you're intelligence deserved assuming you had the ability to read a story and then to comment on its actual content. I assumed you were taking liberties with it to slam me when in reality you are just unable to read and comprehend it, /My bad. As far as the language I love the fuck word my favorite word and pussy is my second favorite. Profanity does not offend me your stupidity does however. Let me point out it is not my posts that go unread. In the future I will ignore your tirades. I did try to read one of your post but do you not have speel check or a dictionary?

Yabyum thanks man and I love wordplay too, I write a lot of poems that I use similiar sounding word to get a certian rhythm going. Man's again for the kind words my friend.

iblieve

Post by **e_dog** » July 23rd, 2005, 11:44 pm

hostility and sensuality don't mix. this poem 'bites.'

know o fence.

peas.

Post by **Dave The Dov** » July 24th, 2005, 7:48 am

Your poem does have "bite" to it!!!! A lament of longing and going crazy when it comes to it. Finding a way out to express the pain of it as well.
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Post by **jimboloco** » July 24th, 2005, 11:24 am

yeah i'm gonna abstain from tirade-happy madness, silent treatment,

most unfortunate.

thanks for your efforts i believe,
did i say that?

Post by **iblieve** » July 24th, 2005, 3:07 pm

Thanks e-dog, your opinion is appreciated and Dave thanks for the reply they are always appreciated too.

Yes Jim it is best at time to let silence be one's reply but I do hope you continue to read and enjoy my works, as I do yours.
"C"

Post by **jimboloco** » July 24th, 2005, 5:41 pm

i meant silence for the uncouth one.

he slipped i am afraid.

are you db cooper?
even if you are not, i will encourage your teapot blues,

i once worked in a copper mine in Mtn City Nevada.

Duck River Indian reservation nearby.

You remind me of a cat we called Wolfman, down from Boise.
He had shaved his head and face, then let it grow for three years, all natural.

I went crazy, went to Encinitas looking for Paramahansa, camped on the cliffs, got disillusioned real fast, wound up back on the road and so forth, crazy year, 1973,

a homeboy now.

Post by **Axanderdeath** » July 25th, 2005, 10:43 am

I understood your story man-there is not that much to understand about it. And why asre you making fun of my intelligence you are being rude, and you are the one that started it, and if you think you are great well you never will be, because your stuff licks shit.

thank you

Post by **Axanderdeath** » July 25th, 2005, 10:54 am

iblieve wrote:Thanks jimboloco, i have had to stand my ground moren' once.

Alexanderdeath, have you ever thought that your attitude is why no one comments on your post. I guess I gave you more credit thn you're intelligence deserved assuming you had the ability to read a story and then to comment on its actual content. I assumed you were taking liberties with it to slam me when in reality you are just unable to read and comprehend it, /My bad. As far as the language I love the fuck word my favorite word and pussy is my second favorite. Profanity does not offend me your stupidity does however. Let me point out it is not my posts that go unread. In the future I will ignore your tirades. I did try to read one of your post but do you not have speel check or a dictionary?

Yabyum thanks man and I love wordplay too, I write a lot of poems that I use similiar sounding word to get a certian rhythm going. Man's again for the kind words my friend.

iblieve

You are ripping my intelligence and that is why I am getyting pissed, don't do it, okay. And yoiur story was nothing new--it was not really that interseting and the euphmiisms or what ever seemed kind of useless and if that was the point fine, but I did not like it that much and the thing about making it a movie I was trying to say it sounded like a movie I had seen. Fine I am an idiot, your post on my stuff, like--oh I liked this nice.--coulld be considered as rudeness because of their breifness and at least I gave you an answer that was longer than a sentance--the name of your story is what got me, and the rest was boring, and for this poem I read it quickly and did so just so I could dig in to you--do not call me stupid-d-say I have a lot to learn fine--but don't say I just don't have the brain compasity to comperhen one of you stories. And everyone will be on your side and I don't care-- fuck you all if you don't want to read my post fine don't, but I have never said anything about anyonesd intelligence after they posted a comment that I did not like.

Post by **iblieve** » July 25th, 2005, 7:07 pm

Thanks Jim 1973 was crazy year and only got crazier until 1980. S5till back then people were more laid back and funny we believed things would get better, lmao. Didn't realize their were so many fucking bush's lol.

Post by **Doreen Peri** » July 25th, 2005, 8:16 pm

OK, Geoff.

All your slamming posts are being moved to the Dumpster.

Please stop slamming people and be nice.

You know how it was when peresozo was here. We don't like it when people slam people around here. That's not what this site is for.

If you want to post a critique in a kind manner to someone's work, that's fine. But when you go around calling somebody's work shit, well, that's not fine. It's not acceptable here.

Take it to some other site which doesn't care about respect.

We care about respect here.

We want this site to be a community of artists who nurture each other, not tear each other down and call each other names.

So, if you'd like to continue to hang around, cut it out, ok?

Thanks.

[going now to read through all these posts and move the offending posts to the Dumpster.]

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