Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

once one stood fast feeling hell.
twice twins fouled away.

get west ghosts shout stealing third.
none wanted home.

train.
bus.

train?
bus?

try "ghouls" 'stead of "ghosts" to add some more alliteration(?).
altho i guess "ghosts" works better for consonation.

works for me brother and I think your muse speaks well with great craft with his word play iblieve