Bottomfeeder's logic

[hester_prynne]

The spoils
of plenty,
are a bottomfeeder's
logic.
Abundant fallout,
via the big
o-verrated beast,
sustains us.

We evolve,
as defter-fish,
circling around
ancient stoic islands,
tempted by
frozen treat words,
yet never,
are we overcome.

Our strength of will,
is dive and thrive,
off the grimy-deep,
haughtily forbidden,
untapped
ocean floor,
that holds
us all.

[iblieve]

I love this my friend and your words are too kind to society, the metaphor beST used to describe this dark world would be bottom feeders from the depths of a cesspool, lol. Love your work and looking forward to seeing you in darc this friday for the word jam, please, your talent isneeded, "C"

[hester_prynne]

....bottomfeeders from the depths of cesspool
....sittin in the dark, suckin on their drool
....learned too much from goin to school
....slobberin, throbberin, fool on a stool......

Heh.
It's not that bad, really.
But oh, the wicked writing is fun!

H

[joel]

Elitism is such a funny thing--an ironic thing. The spoils of plenty does seem the bottomfeeders' logic. But the spoils of plenty tend to go the rich and wealthier. When the power-haves are sucking at the plentiful spoils on the bottom, I wonder how they blind themselves into the notion they're somehow different (let allone better) than the power-have-nots who are stuck feeding on the bottom on the just plain spoils?

[hester_prynne]

Indeed Joel, that's a thought that's fathoms deeper than where i was when I wrote this. I think of the "spoils of plenty" as the leftovers deemed garbage by the elite.....for the majority to thrive on....

H

[gypsyjoker]

deleted comment here because I am confused old man
sorry

[gypsyjoker]

I don't know what that poem was about hester, I just take everything personaly
part of my insanity
but god I wish I could hear you sing again.

[Dandylion]

I really like your stuff woman~Dandy

[wylde]

Suckcessed in the anaesthetised ooze of banalities, life clicks on by..so the fabric seams...thread bare...