Flushing Won't Help

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Flushing Won't Help

Post by iblieve » July 25th, 2005, 10:05 pm

Bond fires burn brightly in the night of turmoil
as the world hiccups its soul into blackened air swearing
it’s the second coming the cities aflame as the guitarist plays
like Nero of Rome.
Its not tragic if its destiny
all things fall even my penis when its all used up.
The fornication is over and we all got it in the end
time is up we incinerate the future from past miscalculated risk
still I find it hard from time to time when my mind drifts
into pleasant filth where all my shitty views grew fertile
in the thought that love was a warm hand before realizing
life’s septic tank is full and flushing won’t help.
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Post by hester_prynne » July 25th, 2005, 11:03 pm

you can't flush everybody,
you gotsta flush yereself!

Heh.
enjoyed this,
H 8)

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Post by iblieve » July 26th, 2005, 3:37 pm

Thanks hester I guess you're right but I'll wait a spell, lol. I do appreciate the read. "C"
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Post by mnaz » July 29th, 2005, 12:12 pm

..... "pleasant filth"..... yeah, I could easily slip into that....

Enjoyed it. Thanks.

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Post by iblieve » August 1st, 2005, 1:21 pm

Thank you my friend for reading me.
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Post by gypsyjoker » August 1st, 2005, 1:43 pm

that was some great sh*t man :)

this one is very timely to me considering it is getting close to 08061945 again
time is up we incinerate the future from past miscalculated risk
Have you ever heard of Funkadelic?, way before your time.

"I knew I had to rise above it all or drown in my own shit"
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Post by mnaz » August 1st, 2005, 9:10 pm

or another one....

"If you don't like the effects, don't produce the cause"....

I always liked that one.

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Post by iblieve » August 2nd, 2005, 1:31 am

I rememrb them man, hell I'm an old hippie be 49 next month, listened to them some but was more of a rainbow, black sabbath rush, person myself then I heard the outlaw country and the blues men and never been the same but yea funk was good too.
It's the time of the burning
we aint learning
what the fuck can I say
to change a thing today
BUsh would cut my tongue out
without a doubt
the lying fucker
huckster corn shucker
I aint been buying the shit
since drugs I quit
now I see the truth
and it make me want the meth and 100 proof.
"C"
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