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[Axanderdeath]

It is annoying to sit and read all this shit! Not that all of you guys write horrible stuff and I write amazing stuff, no, what bothers me the most is you all think you can tell me a thing or two and I have nothing to say to you that is valid. Are any of you published? I mean that. Really published not a chap book or an E-book that you paid somebody to do for you and you sold it to your mom, not that. That is nothing. You are all in the same boat as me weather you like it or not. Most of the stuff on here (including my work) is not very good, really, and it bores me but nobody will say “hey man that was pretty predictable,” or “that was frankly bad stuff.” The only person you can say that to is me. Why because you do not get my stuff, and you are all too educated to be spontaneous and really enjoy your own boring word play about Greeks and Romans doing little boys in the summer, but put in a clever little shit poem. Anyway I am tired of being shit on here so fuck you all…. Have a happy time lying to each other!


Geoff Parsons

[iblieve]

As a matter of a fact I have a novel published with Infinity Publishing and it has sold in five countries and though I will never get rich off of it I am proud of it cause you know what asshole, I wrote every word, I edited every page, I formatted it, I came up with the cover concept and worked with a great artist to get it just right. I did it all myself and everyone that has read it has loved it. I have had some of my lighter poetry published by a New England company in a small chat book that I am also very proud of and my name is recognized and been published by several websites in many countries including India and Saudi Arabia. I was the editor of an online newsletter and have edited several books of poetry for other people. I am the co-founder of the DARC POETS Society which has very talented members from over six countries and a website to give their muse a voice in a friendly atmosphere where I can guarantee no one will be belligerent without a reason. And you know what is the most important thing to me, I have never done any of these things for money, it has always and always will be for the love of the art. I love writing and I love poetry and I spend all my time nurturing others. Go back and read real slowly using a dictionary if need be and see where I have ever told you how to write one damn thing, I never do because I believe a person can never dictate to another what comes form the heart and soul and if your poetry and stories come from any other place then its trash.. Once again my brother no one is out to get you or ridicule your writing they just ignore you cause you take it the wrong way when they do comment.

Why don't you find you a nice children's site to write at or better yet, go to www.fanstory.com that is all they do there is rip each other apart. Once again have a great day. If you truly want to start over with a clean slate go to www.scribblerscorner.com that is a very nice site although I was kicked off of there, you might fit in cause most of the writers are nice and average.

The ASSHOLE iblieve

PS I am really, really, really tired of your fucking whining.

[joel]

I'm sorry I was away and am late posting this.

I have no credentials. We should all know that by reading my stuff...I just like to tinker. And I haven't been posting here very long at all. But what I've read of yours I have liked. I tend to be critical--hopefully critique and not criticism--and I hope that wasn't taken as any personally against your writing.

Seems you have the kind of desire to write and carry on with your art that won't be killed by poor reviews--though I really thought you've offered good stuff from what I've read. I hope sometime to read more. I do trite well (I think); I've thought you do well what isn't trite.

[stilltrucking]

Geoff do you remember Learned? He used to blow me away. You remind me of him. Good writers don't have to be nice guys. But reality bleeds into fiction. And it is hard not to read something about the author into his work. I got to get back to my telemarketing work pretty soon. I am the world's worst procrastinator. I just got back from my morning walk, two days in a row now! If I keep it up I man survive. While I walk i try to meditate. You were much on my mind. I came back here to read all your faction (well back though June anyway) I am going to try my hand at deconstruction.

when I said get fucked I was not saying get lost. I am going to pay particular attention to your female characters. I think there was one in there that you had a little tenderness in your voice. This is Doreen's garden where we try to nurture each other's creative efforts. Where writers try to find their voice.

keep on keeping on my wayward sun.
be back with the deconstruction soon as possible

[stilltrucking]

It is annoying to sit and read all this shit!

lets move on from here

nice try
don't cry
haiku don't lie

I got into a low period last year
I got hooked on TV preachers
I needed something to annoy me
just to make it through the night
like a chicken hauler with a double pinger
this time of the morning headed west between Pecos and the 10/20 junction
wake with a start from a dream about driving a truck
double pingers can be a sweet sound.
but not day and night
"blow up your tv
eat a lot of peaches"

[gypsyjoker]

be belligerent without a reason

tell if you please what is a good reason to be belligerent?

just curious.