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YABYUM
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Post by YABYUM » August 5th, 2005, 11:57 pm

some person say
get your
you away
i just turned
left
felt right
went down central
beer was all ways cheaper there.

where is
what
and who said
forget
toe lines,
tug a tug a choo

get me now
how
heal a son
ticks
it

design dance
dee
dee
dum
blum

dance and diminish
get what heals

go

fornicate
create followers

bub a bub gat ga
ha ha no kee

should wood for a hit
hoo hay

when does dancers see
hee haw wah

silent.

that's why they call me One Take Rod
a tug a ka choo
triple tongued
monk fingered
the dance of generations


tickle
blow
fret

forum
blow
wind

ivory
veins cant
i've for we

tant ta late
tickle
whisper
cigarette circles

linus
minus
silent

she is on
on she is my stick
my beat
mt resonation

heal
she
never will me
me wills her still

silent
head manifest
feast heart out loud
breath

brass
ass
slap

sub
mission
sub
marine

get me get


she sheets
is she
shall we tap all night

thump
tap
ta da

neck arch
type fast
get hard

sheets we lay
poles made
under our owned
sky light tonite cream

tap
blow

whisper
feel
felt

velvet
silent


foremost opinion
holy held get gotten

he should
shield
shelter
blankets
get under

breathe
breath
blow

sym
for not hyp

no tice
vice
fa fa go ha he

under me no night sky stares stars
glow
go
dance
tickle
breathe
breath

silent


nice.
clay.
nice.
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hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » August 6th, 2005, 3:09 pm

"under me no night sky stares stars"

Fabulous line yab.
one of many in this.......

really good read....

H 8)

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Post by Dandylion » August 6th, 2005, 3:23 pm

you are always an interesting read. You cant just skim through your poems, they need to be sipped and tasted slowly...like wine. Excellent. Wondering how this sounds erad loud?~Dandy
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