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the sound of one ball slapping.

Posted: August 6th, 2005, 4:18 am
by gypsyjoker
The worst thing about being blind
Is not being able see her face
Plowing a furrow
Out of mind into her skin
then a distraction that make sex seem so ludicrous

I become conscious of my balls slapping her pudendum
It was easier when I could see her face I could stay focused
But now sometimes
I have to stop

And in the darkness find her face with my hands and kiss her lips

Posted: August 6th, 2005, 3:04 pm
by hester_prynne
faceless physical intimacy shuts me down too.
always has.

I like this.
It's very personal.
Very strong.

H 8)

Posted: August 6th, 2005, 3:10 pm
by Dandylion
wow...not sure what to say, but Im liking this poem a gerat deal~Dandy

Posted: August 6th, 2005, 4:57 pm
by gypsyjoker
The worst thing about being blind
Is not being able see her face
I was coming back here to edit that line Hester, sounds like self pity.
He knows her face like the back of his hand
I was thinking how people say the blind have a sharpened sense of hearing. They must also have a super sensitive sense of touch. He has a dialogue of the skin with his fingers. I want the gypsyjoker to be a grateful old man.
Happy you both liked it. Love has no shame.

Posted: August 6th, 2005, 6:32 pm
by hester_prynne
PS
By the way Still, that signature rocks.
grins me out every time.....

H 8)

Posted: August 6th, 2005, 7:00 pm
by gypsyjoker
I took a psyche profile test to get a job at Preston Frieght Lines, I got three questions wrong.

I know why stars twinkle T/F
I know how to use a microscope T/F
People can often feel my power T/F

So how are the tunes coming along?
You want me to send you a quater every time I play one of your songs?