Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

sleeping out side
for no reason,
just tired
and drunk
too far to walk home
angry
and let down
in hot landry
old women in fat
women clothing
yelling in french
angry hangover
little tics in hair from the grass
cuts
negitive test results
life and freedom
but anger is in me
and is strong
and anger is an interseting emotion, and we should not be afraid of it and hate it, we should build our own worlds of hate and angry, evil resistance to evil anger.

but really anger just means that
upest goings on
and dead feeling of joy and
if you are hateful enough
you can destroy it all and
start all over
push ups for life
push ups
1, 2, 3,
reps of 25
2, ,3, 4
and anger reading magazines with titles like
whores on the floor
about the porn industry
and the sad little thoughts of porn junkies...

and I* cant read a real book
and won t spend the money
20 dollars for
me to hate a writer
because he did it
she did it before me
and I am not there
and WHY?

Hate anger
throwong things around
talking to people
buying a crazy russian beer
and ytelling the whole time to tom waits
which the russians girl friend the bar tender
put on for us for a russian hat dance or something
like that, but then I start to do my tom waits impression
talking bull shit with long drawn out @and I walking intoi dives and sit, in chair, and look up to see her with her sweet chic smile, and I mosey on up, and aww, it is like the light of god was shine a down on her with her lite ciggareets and sweet chic smile@

it is too much for them
kicked out
hated
angry...

I read it Geoff
got to read it some more
I like the way it looks, I mean how it lies on the page.

burned out, my mind's a joke, read it again after I detox. But it sounds right. Honesty, I will always try to give it to you.

do you watch the view numbers on the first page of creative? So far five people have viewed. If you see a poem of yours that has about 50 views and no replies, that means something. Now go pick on somebody your own age.

stilltrucking wrote:I read it Geoff
got to read it some more
I like the way it looks, I mean how it lies on the page.

burned out, my mind's a joke, read it again after I detox.

I dont know why you liked it
it was just shit off the top of my head writen down and not checked--might be some slips in there--I just like righting and knowt carin

anger man, just anger, I can't tell you why I liked it, between the conception and the creation lies the shadow of entropy. I could jam it if you want me to. just start throwing some words down spontaneous gibberish like this. Words are like concrete blocks for me. they are all too real.

stilltrucking wrote:anger man, just anger, I can't tell you why I liked it, between the conception and the creation lies the shadow of entropy. I could jam it if you want me to. just start throwing some words down spontaneous gibberish like this. Words are like concrete blocks for me. they are all to real.

you used the word-entropy-nice word, i HAD TO LOOK IT UP.

Ineresting post by Traveller13 on inspitation station.

Got me thinking of T S Eliat Hollow Men. Life is anti-entropy.

I am so burned out ibeen writing 18 hours a day here, flies in the kitchen I finally took the trash out.

goto go

Geoff, I likes it man

want you to be a survivor, man.
I care about you

very clear flow
i can picture the scene thoroughly

"i don know why you like it"

interesting you express frustration that your writing is not respected enough and when Mr Tilles says he digs it you come up all too modest.

Its;'s why I dig you, maybe I will adopt you too, like I did Kayla,
pseudo-Gowd-son.

Lo0ve ya, mon

what's this about a Tom Waits improv?