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gypsy frenzy
Posted: August 26th, 2005, 12:29 am
by alienpoet
every sweet rose colored wall
is licked by the gypsy's thirsty tongue
her song is offered
loud ,strong and flavored with...
life...
living...
40 years in savory marinated juices
blood red vocal chords
open mouth parched
and blistered
hot
wild refrains near insane
a sudden cold wind in a frenzy
blows
and the gypsy is gone
and the song is over...
for now
Posted: August 26th, 2005, 2:06 pm
by WIREMAN
hello AP......ya struck a chord with this wired man, love this one mi amigo........
Posted: August 26th, 2005, 4:55 pm
by Doreen Peri
Nice!
Loved "licked by the gypsy's thirsty tongue"
and "40 years in savory marinated juices"
and
"blood red vocal chords
open mouth parched
and blistered
hot "
Aw hell, AP - I'm quoting the whole darn thing! ha!
Well done, my friend. Good to see you here!
(what happened to your avatar? It's not showing. )
Posted: August 27th, 2005, 5:20 am
by alienpoet
thanks mucho wired.
thanks Doreen. Don't know ...did i have one?
Posted: August 27th, 2005, 9:36 am
by Arcadia
sanguíneas rojas cuerdas vocales
I like this line
Posted: August 27th, 2005, 7:52 pm
by alienpoet
thank u muchas galore . i think i mispelled marinated...
Posted: August 28th, 2005, 1:53 pm
by iblieve
You have a reason to mispelled words dear, you write in the DARC, lol. Awesome visionary writing with emotional substance. Never do I get enough of your writing. "C"
Posted: August 28th, 2005, 2:19 pm
by mtmynd
great images painted with words dipped in emotions drawn from the well of your creativity.
well done!
Posted: August 29th, 2005, 3:31 am
by alienpoet
mucho thanks to I.b and mtmynd-apreciate the comments friends.
Posted: September 5th, 2005, 11:46 pm
by Bohemian
By chance did you pull your words of choice, from the box of magnetic words? The piece was visionary, and lucid, very cool.
Bohemian
Posted: September 28th, 2005, 4:48 am
by alienpoet
thanks Bohemian. no i didn't but love yur comment.