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sober
Posted: August 28th, 2005, 6:05 pm
by Axanderdeath
arr
the godamn
god man
angry again at
little old me
who can controll
his
mind from fantasy of
it all being okay
soul searching in clear head
of forever hurting
and yearning for numb
sweat escape
Posted: September 3rd, 2005, 6:27 am
by ~K
Doubts crowd
the sober mind as
reluctant triggers fire,
all hell prepares
to welcome you with
open arms & naked truth.
Posted: September 3rd, 2005, 1:57 pm
by Axanderdeath
~K wrote:Doubts crowd
the sober mind as
reluctant triggers fire,
all hell prepares
to welcome you with
open arms & naked truth.
sorry for the rude writings about women if that made you angry, I am really hurt right now is all--I think your one of the better poets on here, you have caught my eye--short and swaeet
Posted: September 8th, 2005, 8:55 am
by ~K
Thank you for the apology. I accept. I find your writing equally stimulating. Please, keep on.
Posted: September 8th, 2005, 5:28 pm
by joel
K and Axanderdeath--
Along with your writings, I find your poetic and honest dialog stimulating. Thanks.
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What faith is asked to finish day;
to bear blindness and to betray sight—
for senseless sleep to stifle touch
and to forgo taste through a fasting night—
to relinquish smell and let living sense fade off
save just to hear what just is left:
organic heartbeats ground against ourselves
until faith takes hold and finally rest arrives,
with hope to wake and hear life in its sense again
or else to sleep on under some seductive organ-grinder’s hymn.
Posted: September 9th, 2005, 9:14 pm
by Axanderdeath
I find 52 veiws on this one poem stupid--I am confused and that is the only truth to it--that I don`t know what to think anymore...