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First bit PC

Posted: October 8th, 2005, 11:18 am
by Axanderdeath
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Posted: October 8th, 2005, 12:00 pm
by Axanderdeath
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Posted: October 8th, 2005, 1:03 pm
by Axanderdeath
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Posted: October 8th, 2005, 5:43 pm
by Axanderdeath
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really got it going on

Posted: October 10th, 2005, 3:27 am
by creativesoul
yeah this is script material, like it alot
physical description and action seems pretty good
get the camera before that guy gets away

Posted: October 14th, 2005, 8:10 pm
by Rat Bag
I reckon!

What do you think, Ax?

Posted: October 15th, 2005, 11:39 am
by Axanderdeath
well, I know not much has happend in the story yet, but I have Ideas. I have writen more but it is all long hand--I have no computer at home. Script? why not? Thanks for reading...

Posted: October 29th, 2005, 11:44 pm
by gypsyjoker
Not much has Happend yet? Not the way I read it :D

A lot of stuff going on. I was popping in and out of different peoples minds. I was wondering what you were thinking, or was it spontaneous, and how much do I get it. Just fun to read.



but what do I know ?
just a fan of your stuff