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wind

Posted: October 16th, 2005, 1:21 pm
by Arcadia
water
fire
earth

where is my mother
where are my sons and daughters
today?

too much wind
too much water
too much sun-day cloudy sun-day

you tell me
about mountains and valleys
and I can´t feel them
big plains
and nothing to hold on to

wind
water
fire
earth

four
turn

Posted: October 16th, 2005, 2:15 pm
by mtmynd
Very nice, Arcadia... muy nice. Me gusta.

Gracias!

Posted: October 16th, 2005, 4:55 pm
by Doreen Peri
the elements
cause my blood
to pump

thank you for this, arcadia

enjoyed much!

Posted: October 16th, 2005, 6:28 pm
by Dixie
having lived by the beach all my life, I've been wanting to go to the mountains for awhile

good write here, made me long for at least thinking about moving

Posted: October 17th, 2005, 12:04 am
by judih
like a lone flute in the wind

very simple, haunting, arcadia

judih

Posted: October 17th, 2005, 1:10 pm
by Arcadia
mother´s day crisis and I Ching. I felt specially alien yesterday.
thanks for reading!,

Arcadia