the waves

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e_dog
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the waves

Post by e_dog » October 1st, 2004, 2:52 pm

she asked why my eyes were wet
and my mouth was always frowning

'cause i haven't reached shore yet
but at least i'm no longer drowning

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Post by mnaz » October 3rd, 2004, 8:00 am

music.

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Post by WIREMAN » October 3rd, 2004, 2:39 pm

sure is a good musical verse ....e-dog.....wired

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Post by mtmynd » October 3rd, 2004, 2:57 pm

yo! e-dog... i haven't heard the music, but the rhythm sure is there.

cool!

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Post by e_dog » August 28th, 2005, 9:45 pm

-- thus spake the fisherman

before the hurricane

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