I Don't Belong here (senryu)
I Don't Belong here (senryu)
It's obvious now.
Should have listened to myself
from the very start.
Should have listened to myself
from the very start.
- Doreen Peri
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Yes you do.
(But I'm sure you're not talking about *here*, meaning right here, but yeah, you belong lotsa places.)
I've felt this way before and you stated it quite clearly ... I know this feeling. Well done!
Question... I counted the syllables and it's 5-7-5 like they teach the standard haiku.
What makes this a senryu?
I'm familiar with the term but I never really studied the format. What's the difference between haiku and senryu?
Looking forward to your answer.
Tanka very much.
(But I'm sure you're not talking about *here*, meaning right here, but yeah, you belong lotsa places.)
I've felt this way before and you stated it quite clearly ... I know this feeling. Well done!
Question... I counted the syllables and it's 5-7-5 like they teach the standard haiku.
What makes this a senryu?
I'm familiar with the term but I never really studied the format. What's the difference between haiku and senryu?
Looking forward to your answer.
Tanka very much.
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surface bullshit
the moon in the water
is life fair
anniefay's hair
the moon in the water
is life fair
anniefay's hair
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'Blessed is he who was not born, Or he, who having been born, has died. But as for us who live, woe unto us, Because we see the afflictions of Zion, And what has befallen Jerusalem." Pseudepigrapha
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