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Post by creativesoul » November 9th, 2005, 10:08 pm

the sad thing
is even when people are sincere
we doubt them
we are suspicious like a rape victim
of anyone coming round
that we do not know well
protective like a mother of her babe
or a theif of what he has not stolen yet
mine mine
defense that wittles away at anything ever touching us
the bubble that surrounds in white light
seems somehow too protective and isolative
rome will fall
as all empires do
surrender
aloow it to go
bring on the new, the ticklish
no snap your fingers magic
this is a process although i would love to be the one to open your heart
i think maybe that is not my job
it is yours
so i am going to the party next door and leaving the cold information box to sleep
tonight i will love actual flesh and bones
hair and lips
a mind will surface on the tips of this shore
waters lap in the tides as they shift
inside my moons and planets

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Re: tragic

Post by joel » November 9th, 2005, 10:29 pm

creativesoul wrote:protective like a mother of her babe
or a theif of what he has not stolen yet

i would love to be the one to open your heart
i think maybe that is not my job
it is yours
so i am going to the party next door

When I was thief, I was jealous
of what people earned
and thought of as their own
because in my
mind and heart and guts
those earners were hording
my very own possessions;
I did not steal,
I recovered.

When I was earning, I was alone
with my skills and with my talents and with my abilities to produce
everything I contracted to deserve
and somehow I lost the connection—
the belief I am free to impact my neighbor's life—
perhaps the possibility to love the other—
and I was lost in my own context;
I did not gain,
I lost.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by gypsyjoker » November 9th, 2005, 10:36 pm

This is the audacious hubris of tragedy, the inevitable reality-challenging statement of the participant in a dramatic action he does not know is "tragic." He dies, and only we can see the purpose of his death—to illustrate the error of a personality who believed itself godlike.
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'Blessed is he who was not born, Or he, who having been born, has died. But as for us who live, woe unto us, Because we see the afflictions of Zion, And what has befallen Jerusalem." Pseudepigrapha

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Post by hester_prynne » November 13th, 2005, 5:38 am

finger snappin magic.
"bring it on" she says.......

Waiting for the sun
after 1000 days of rain.
Self-burial,
in damp tempest.
Ghost images,
dart to
and fro,
random,
peripheral,
indecipherable,
black spots
haunt.
Wayfaring,
weary,
yet still
I fathom
further
into the deep,
to bottomfeed,
to spin out,
to come to,
glaringly unblinded,
well undone,
arriving,
at last,
to grieve
the loss
of us oceans,
separated firmly,
yet only,
by flesh and blood.


Good stuff creativesoul. As usual.
Always love readin you....

H 8)

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Post by tinkerjack » November 13th, 2005, 1:33 pm

that is a big ten four hester

CS, i forgot to mention that, I loved it too

got me going on mental rambling trip about the death of romance. Ted Hughes and Sylvia Plath. If ever there was a modern tragedy in the classical Greek genre? got to be the story of their marriage.
i would love to be the one to open your heart
Its a party going on here at the studio 24/7. We all open our virtual silicon shinning mirror hearts to each other. Sometimes I get blinded by the light. and no poet should be responsible for where a a readers mind might ramble so far from their words. just surfing the ripples where there poem broke the surface of someone elses bubble.

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sunday morning coming down
hester had a line about saturday night being the loneliest night of the week. dam it must be nice to be so young, young enough to remember date night. life over the road is a good cure for the daily blues. except for sunday, when the driving is more fun, lighter traffic.
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hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » November 13th, 2005, 5:27 pm

Stilltruck had a line about "being totally alienated from society".
I can relate to that.
Although I'm in the stages where the bite of it is still hard to ignore......

H 8)

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Post by ~K » November 19th, 2005, 9:29 am

Moon beams
spotlight
your defection.

You're fading
into shadows
I can't avoid.

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Post by tinkerjack » November 19th, 2005, 10:35 am

being totally alienated from society
change that to woman and he would be closer to the truth.
how does a man become such a stranger to the bearers of life?
just a rhetorical question
as he sits on the dock of the bay and watches that ship sail away :twisted:
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Post by hester_prynne » November 19th, 2005, 1:55 pm

Indeed, a man's feelings of alienation from women is a whole nother ball of wax to melt.
A juicy topic to explore.
Far meatier than androgeny resolutions........

Still, how bout a go thread on it?

Everybody feels it. But what the hell is it, thass what i'd like to know......

H 8)

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Post by mnaz » November 19th, 2005, 3:30 pm

"Men's alienation from women"? Huh?

That's not how I read this.

Then again, I guess it could be read that way.

Never mind.

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